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Mini-Review: Monkey Girl

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So this is going to be brief, and not just because I am reviewing a book that is four years old.


Monkey Girl is Edward Humes narrative coverage of the landmark Kitzmiller v. Dover Area School District. In addition to the highlights of the court proceedings, Humes delves into the events leading up to the case and often takes time to cover the background of the key players.


I never intended to pick this one up, I really have much more important things I should be doing. But Kitzmiller v. Dover remains a fascinating legal battle and my copy was a cheap buy at a Borders that was going out of business.

I was put off by the narrative style. Apparently this is a hallmark of Humes’ reporting (he has even won a Pulitzer for it), but I never warmed up to it. Maybe it is the soulless biologist in me, but I prefer details to narrative flourishes. I felt like I was constantly being distracted from the actual matter at hand by being told how “fiery” and “soulful” people were; nor is he often satisfied with letting the chief players simply “say” things. I kind of feel like this was written with a thesaurus in one hand as though simple language would bore his readers. It had the opposite effect on me and several times I found myself scanning large passages for the kernel of actual detail. In favor of this style, it did make for a quick read.

The narrative style also lent itself to the chronological nature of the narrative and facilitated his introduction of characters in a memorable way, I am just not sure it was the only or best way to accomplish this. The text is also plagued with a great many diversions: details of peoples ancestry, local history, and similar conflicts elsewhere that feel a little like padding. Some of them seem valid, such as the tangent on the history of the Discovery Institute and excerpts from Creationism’s Trojan Horse. Which are bound to be useful if this book is your introduction to this controversy. Others, not so much. In this latter group I would count the several sentence tangent that the title comes from. A brief interlude whose only purpose seems to be to justify an eye-catching title, and does absolutely nothing to further the account. It would have been nice if this book about Dover and the Kitzmiller v. Dover court case hadn’t spent approximately a quarter to a third of its narrative elsewhere.

As far as the analysis and fact gathering go, the book does a great job. If you can stomach the style there is actually quite a bit of information within the narrative and the helpful (if a bit sparse) notes section. He seems to have a talent for succinctly and clearly presenting the arguments and motivations of the fairly large group of people involved. I also appreciate that he tracks the conflict back to its origin in the school board meetings rather than just picking up once the suit was filed. This is especially important in this particular case since the perjury committed by several board members about what had happened played a key role in the decision.


Overall, I enjoyed reading this book. I found it to be an informative look at the events leading up to trial and an interesting overview of the case itself. I do think that the style hurts rather than helps. Humes seems to try to walk the line between informing and entertaining, and it just didn’t work in my opinion. Humes has an excellent eye for noting and including a wealth of detail, yet he seem to have trouble differentiating between relevant and irrelevant details. It is something that probably won’t have a permanent place in my library, but it was definitely worth reading once.

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Written by Caudoviral

04/15/2011 at 17:14

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The Cautious 60%

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So I am sure that some of my readers will have heard about this already, but there is yet another survey floating around showing that (surprise, surprise) evolution is not being well taught in the nation’s highschool classrooms. Given the general level of scientific literacy on the subject, it is no surprise that we find a flaw in primary education on it. It is very difficult to grow up in modern society without being exposed to the idea, and while it is an elegant idea, it is not necessarily a simple one. So the first exposure any given person receives to it is most likely going to be wrong or only partially true. It falls to the humble science teacher to correct and complete these mis and partial understandings.

But the truth of the matter appears to be that they do not. Why? Well, an article in the current issue of Science (“Defeating Creationism in the Courtroom, But Not in the Classroom“) goes into that. We recently all had cause to celebrate the Dover decision, yet the article’s authors state: “We suggest that the cheering was premature and the victory incomplete.”

And they make a pretty good, if depressing, point. Others have focused on the explicit creationists in the school system, and while they are a problem, I have to side with the article’s authors: the so called “cautious 60%” are much more of an immediate concern. Maybe I am biased in thinking that even a 15 year old child should be able to see through the arguments of a dogmatic creationist, or maybe I am just more concerned about a silent majority than I am about a vocal minority (since the latter tends to only thrive in the tacit approval of the former).

So the findings of the study show that vocal evolutionists and vocal creationists make up only a 40% of America’s highschool science teachers. What about the 60% left over? They just want to keep their heads down and teach in such a way as no one gives them trouble, regardless of the consequences to their student’s understanding. The tactics most commonly used to do so are three: (1) Teach evolution solely on the micro scale; (2) teach evolution to the test while giving vocal caveats that the test is structured as if evolution were true and that they are certainly not making any kind of statement on the matter or asserting it as really true (the tactic my particular highschool biology teacher used); and (3) teaching the “controversy”.

Now all three of these are very problematic: (1) Ignores the very sizeable amount of evidence and very important role of macro-evolution. It leaves their students ill-informed and ill-equipped, and undermines the entire theory as a whole. (2) & (3) are even worse. They introduce into the classroom this air of intellectual relativism, to whit an idea that demonstrated scientific fact should have only as much credence as opinion. And moreover that the individual students opinion is more important than the proceedings of the entire scientific community. A very odd and obviously misguided notion. While encouraging free thought is a noble endeavour, encouraging a disregard and disrespect of rational thought and evidence is quite the opposite.

The cautious 60% may play a far more important role in hindering scientific literacy in the United States than the smaller number of explicit creationists. The strategies of emphasizing microevolution, justifying the curriculum on the basis of state-wide tests, or “teaching the controversy” all undermine the legitimacy of findings that are well established by the combination of peer review and replication. These teachers fail to explain the nature of scientific inquiry, undermine the authority of established experts, and legitimize creationist arguments, even if unintentionally.

I think that this silent majority should come under as harsh (or potentially even harsher criticism) than the misguided minority. I have no more respect for the craven than I do for the deluded (and indeed the deluded have a certain air of genuine good-intention behind them, misguided as it is, while the craven only care about their own asses). And after all, I believe someone once said something quite eloquent about planks v. splinters.

Sources & Further Reading

  • Defeating Creationism in the Courtroom, But Not in the Classroom
  • While not directly related, I keep finding myself recommending Dawkin’s new text The Greatest Show on Earth as an excellent primer on evolution, written in accessible language. Although I do generally detest the man’s rhetorical style and patronising attitude.

Written by Caudoviral

02/01/2011 at 21:51

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